Monday, April 08, 2013

The Elbow Stories - award winning poet switches to short fiction

The Elbow Stories

John Adams - Steele Roberts - $29.99
 
Review by Siobhan Harvey

2011 New Zealand Society of Authors Jessie Mackay Award for Best First Poetry Collection winner, John Adams shifts his focus from verse to short fiction in his new book, The Elbow Stories. 11 works are collected here, a range – of subjects, protagonists and language – which showcase Adams’ talents for succinctness, poetic expression and finely crafted detailed in his new chosen form.

            In the opening offering, egotistical surgeon, Jermyn Staines’ ethical judgment is influenced by a series of blood-stained dreams. In ‘Fishbowl’, a group of regulars at a holiday park treat newcomers Sweetie, Cowboy and their sons with the kind of animosity that speaks volumes (to many outsiders, migrants….) about the full implications of the mateship upon which modern New Zealand society is predicated. In ‘Where the Elbow Points’, the works of famed New Zealand poet, Robyn Hyde and famed US poet, William Carlos Williams influence the interactions and output of a rural poetry group. Here and elsewhere a subtext of remoteness and isolation inform Adams’ stories. It’s a seclusion of people detached from one another (family members; villages in country communities…) as much as the separation of place (landscape, home….), as the opening of the tongue-in-cheek work ‘The Moon’s Smile’:

 

Autumn showers had given way to an unexpected dry spell. Under a bare sky, early dusk

robbed the suburb of colour. Familiar shapes loomed black, white and moon-washed blue.

My car had brought me through the last bend into the final stretch, where defoliated plane trees lined the margins of the street…

 

            What follows is a tale of a writer named John, a gathering with his wife and her friend, and a discussion about the crux of the word elbow, lightly used but integral to unlocking the meaning of a new story the fictional author has penned. Tongue in cheek? Serious inter-textuality? Or the key to divining Adams’ wider work here, as well as an author who’s happy to construct narratives around a fictional doppelganger? You decide. Irrespective, these queries summarize the complexities and inventiveness evident in The Elbow Stories, as indeed in they did in Adams’ poetry collection, Briefcase.

Along the way, as the above quote illustrates there’s something sumptuous about the use of language, the colour Adams’ brings to his descriptions, the vividness he brings to his characters. These matters are nowhere more apparent than in the Indian family constricted by tradition in contemporary Awahaere Adams astutely fleshes out in ‘Second Marriage’ and teenage Jackie, unwitting holder of her families conflicting legal secrets in ‘From the Cellar’. Towards the close of the collection, the author returns us to these characters in the stories ‘Lines of Engagement’ and ‘Below the Hedge’, deepening their relationships with each other and with us the reader, and extending out the significant subject matters each dual-narrative raises: familial loyalty; cross-cultural romance; modern independence versus bygone tradition; the roles of gender politics in our everyday existences.

With these intersections of narrative, the evocative language, the vibrant, quirky dramatis personae and the deft weight assigned to frequencies (words such as ‘elbow’, places such as Awahaere) The Elbow Stories is a promising debut story collection by a writer who, on the strength of this book and his first poetry collection, suggests much potential.

  
About the reviewer
Siobhan Harvey is the author of the poetry collection, Lost Relatives (Steele Roberts NZ, 2011), the book of literary interviews Words Chosen Carefully: New Zealand Writers in Discussion (Cape Catley, 2010) and the poetry anthology Our Own Kind: 100 New Zealand Poems about Animals (Random House, 2009). Recently, her poetry has been published in Evergreen Review (Grove Press, US), Meanjin (Aus), Penduline Press – The New Zealand Issue (US), Snorkel (Aus) and Structo (UK). She’s Poetry Editor of Takahe and coordinates New Zealand's National Poetry Day. She was runner up in 2012 Dorothy Porter Prize for Poetry (Aus), 2012 Kevin Ireland Poetry Prize, 2011 Landfall Essay Prize and 2011 Kathleen Grattan Award for a Sequence of Poems, and shortlisted for the 2012 Jane Frame Memorial Award for Literature. A Poet’s Page containing a selection of her recorded work and texts can be found on The Poetry Archive (U.K.), directed by Sir Andrew Motion.

 

 

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